The Elements Exploration: Interwoven Narratives of Pain
Young Freya stays with her self-absorbed mother in Cornwall when she encounters teenage twins. "The only thing better than being aware of a secret," they advise her, "is having one of your own." In the time that follow, they sexually assault her, then bury her alive, a mix of anxiety and irritation darting across their faces as they finally release her from her temporary coffin.
This might have stood as the jarring centrepiece of a novel, but it's merely a single of many terrible events in The Elements, which gathers four novelettes – published distinctly between 2023 and 2025 – in which characters confront historical pain and try to discover peace in the contemporary moment.
Debated Context and Subject Exploration
The book's issuance has been overshadowed by the inclusion of Earth, the subsequent novella, on the candidate list for a notable LGBTQ+ writing prize. In August, the majority other candidates withdrew in dissent at the author's controversial views – and this year's prize has now been called off.
Conversation of LGBTQ+ matters is not present from The Elements, although the author explores plenty of major issues. Anti-gay prejudice, the effect of traditional and social media, parental neglect and abuse are all explored.
Four Narratives of Pain
- In Water, a mourning woman named Willow moves to a isolated Irish island after her husband is incarcerated for awful crimes.
- In Earth, Evan is a footballer on trial as an accomplice to rape.
- In Fire, the adult Freya juggles vengeance with her work as a surgeon.
- In Air, a parent flies to a funeral with his young son, and considers how much to reveal about his family's past.
Trauma is piled on trauma as damaged survivors seem doomed to bump into each other again and again for eternity
Related Narratives
Relationships multiply. We first meet Evan as a boy trying to escape the island of Water. His trial's group contains the Freya who shows up again in Fire. Aaron, the father from Air, works with Freya and has a child with Willow's daughter. Minor characters from one narrative resurface in homes, bars or judicial venues in another.
These plot threads may sound tangled, but the author is skilled at how to power a narrative – his previous successful Holocaust drama has sold millions, and he has been translated into many languages. His straightforward prose sparkles with gripping hooks: "ultimately, a doctor in the burns unit should know better than to toy with fire"; "the primary step I do when I arrive on the island is alter my name".
Character Development and Storytelling Strength
Characters are drawn in brief, impactful lines: the compassionate Nigerian priest, the disturbed pub landlord, the daughter at conflict with her mother. Some scenes resonate with melancholy power or perceptive humour: a boy is hit by his father after having an accident at a football match; a narrow-minded island mother and her Dublin-raised neighbour trade jabs over cups of watery tea.
The author's ability of transporting you wholeheartedly into each narrative gives the return of a character or plot strand from an previous story a authentic frisson, for the initial several times at least. Yet the aggregate effect of it all is desensitizing, and at times nearly comic: trauma is piled on suffering, coincidence on accident in a bleak farce in which hurt survivors seem doomed to meet each other repeatedly for forever.
Conceptual Depth and Concluding Evaluation
If this sounds not exactly life and more like purgatory, that is aspect of the author's point. These damaged people are burdened by the crimes they have suffered, trapped in routines of thought and behavior that stir and spiral and may in turn damage others. The author has talked about the influence of his individual experiences of abuse and he depicts with sympathy the way his ensemble navigate this perilous landscape, extending for remedies – seclusion, frigid water immersion, forgiveness or bracing honesty – that might provide clarity.
The book's "fundamental" concept isn't terribly instructive, while the brisk pace means the exploration of social issues or online networks is primarily shallow. But while The Elements is a imperfect work, it's also a entirely accessible, survivor-centered saga: a welcome riposte to the usual fixation on authorities and offenders. The author shows how suffering can permeate lives and generations, and how time and care can silence its reverberations.